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Wow! I really loved this but when I read the afterword I was blown away. Amazing testimony, excellent writing.
I hope you have plans to try to publish this, after its appearance in the Book here.
Super job. Writing Extroadinaire. Great, moving, anointed testimony. God bless.
This is the kind of story that Guideposts likes to print. Hopefully you will get into the top ten so that your query letter will not be overlooked.
Love the epilogue.
The last line is perfect for this wonderful true story.
Wow that was amazing! I loved the ending, like a surprise ending,you thought it ended good, and it ends BETTER twice! Beautiful work.... Human or angel, I hope to meet Lilly in heaven!

Totally awesome! The afterword hit me like a bomb!! This is well-told and a true tribute to an unsung heroine used by God to protect your very life. WOW!
What a wonderful story! I love how beautifully it fits the topic. Yes, this story needs to be published.
Oooh, that last line gave me shivers! Love it!
Your epilogue was the crowning touch to a great story that has a poignant message for our young women of today.

Great atmosphere, dialogue and emotion. Loved your story!

I love this article. I was so drawn in I forgot I was reading. Excellent writing, and a beautiful story with an OH SO happy ending.
Great story. I think it was the epilogue that makes it seem real. Good job showing a difficult decision in any young mothers life.
Wow! Goosebumps galore! This is amazing and I really loved it. Thanks so much for sharing it.
Yes! And I like how your title ties in to your ending. My husband is adopted. He could very easily have been aborted too back in the late 60's. I thank God for stories like yours that let people know there are MUCH better options then those the world offers! Great job!
Just amazingly crafted. A true masterpiece, Lynda! I like absolutely positively everything about this.
Wow, Lynda! Way to pack a punch with your ending. This was an extraordinary testimony that needs to be published more widely. Congratulations on your well deserved win.