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Great imagery throughout this poetic piece.
I love all the images in this gorgeous poem, but "carbon bits of waltzing coal"-- now that's genius!
Beautiful in imagery and lyrical cadence. A life lesson to ponder as well. Magnificent!
Great words, nicely put.

Indeed, the magnificence of GOD is awesome and full of mercies!

Thanks for sharing.
This all felt very wise and deep. Excellent imagery. It was probably on purpose to leave out "verse" spacing (can't you tell I'm not a poet??), but it would have made it easier for me to read had there been blocks of lines. Make any sense?
I went soaring with them, smooth as silk. I marvel at this creation of God and your ability to share it with your readers.

Lovely. Excellent imagery. 'Nuff said.
What a marvelous, delightful gift you have.
Wow! I loved immersing myself in this. Your descriptive phrases are superb! Beautiful artistry here!
This is the kind of poetry that makes you want to savor each word. Absolutely gorgeous!