The Official Writing Challenge
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This was cute, fun, entertaining and loved that it was told from the dog's POV. I'm still smiling.
Having recently become a dog owner again, I could relate to this. I enjoyed looking at the world through a dog's eyes. Thanks for sharing.
This was so great. I've heard it said that a lot of those little dogs are big dogs in a small package. Simba is quite wise. This had me smiling and laughing. And it does have quite a bit of truth in it, animals and babies, we should trust their judgement for they see or smell things adults often miss.
Cute canine story - loved the barks. Like punctuation marks. Bark. Bark bark. :-)
The style you choose absolutely completed this adorable story. Each description, character, bark, and mention of squeakers brought a smile to my face. One of the best animal stories I’ve read yet! :) Congratulations on the Highly Commended! This story deserved it.
Very entertaining from a fresh point of view!
REALLY fun and well written.

A pleasure to read!