The Official Writing Challenge
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Good analogy of muddy puddles and messy lives, with God still using all of it for His purpose. Really liked your phrase of brittle grass.
This is a wonderful story. I could see it as the main body of a devotion. I enjoyed the analogy. Plus I learned a new word-toques. That could come in handy the next time I play Scrabble:)
08/19/10
Nice devotion. Keep up the good work. May God Bless You, ruth
08/20/10
I enjoyed this but got a little lost on the fourth paragraph....worded differently I think it would have been easier to read.

Message was great.
08/21/10
I can relate to being excited about God's plans for the future one instant and then getting discouraged the next. Love the hope in the end, that in the midst of our troubles, God can use us.

I noticed a few places that may need some commas, but I really liked your descriptions of winter melting into spring.
08/22/10
Liked the images of the prairie and the message throughout this piece.
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