The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/07
Have always loved this Bible story. Great show of perspective from father (our heavenly Father) and the son. Poem flows nicely...excellent writing.
05/24/07
This is beautiful! I thought it flowed well and the message is so tender and loving, you made this seem new. The title is beautiful as well. This is simply lovely.
05/24/07
Sweet, tender, profound. This touches a place where we've all experience deep emotion - the heart of relationship. Nicely done!
05/25/07
A beautiful poetic version of the son that was lost, then found. I found it very touching. Good job!
Pat Guy  
05/25/07
I loved that I never thought from the father's perspective and you brought this to light very eloquently.

I love this story, and I love this poem ... very well written.
05/25/07
Very nice!
05/27/07
Good job showing the yearning and perspectives. I enjoyed reading this.
05/27/07
I like your retelling of the Prodical Son. Good work.
05/28/07
Your rhythm and rhyming are superb, but I especially like the "I wonder if..." thread that winds through this poem. Nice job!
05/29/07
Wonderfully written poem on the Prodical Son. Very descriptive. Encouraging.
05/30/07
I love this - the parable of the prodigal son has become one of my favorites, and you did a great job of bringing it to life.
05/30/07
This is very good. I love this story, and to read it from both perspectives is great. Good job.