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05/24/07
What a great poem. It's like you read my heart and put it to paper. I love the line about the God who wears heaven as His robe. Just powerful.
05/25/07
A great message, but not exactly poetic in my humble opinion of poetry. Very good story, however, with great points to ponder.
05/28/07
Nice. Very powerful thoughts.
This is how many of us feel from time to time. Thanks for sharing.
Those first two lines are my favorite. What an excellent truth!
One thought for critique: if you added more imagery I could see this speaking to the heart at a greater level.
Keep up the good work!
05/30/07
Wonderful title.

I'm not a poetry person -- so I can't comment on your poetry writing skills. (I think all poetry is supposed to rhyme -- I don't understand free verse stuff.)

That being said -- your words had a big impact on me. I especially related to the part about healing. That's something I'm struggling with in my life. Your thoughts really spoke to me. Thank you.