The Official Writing Challenge
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04/26/07
Very cute! I liked the "romance novel" interjections throughout. This was a well-crafted piece. Nicely done.
04/26/07
I enjoyed the mix of writing and story line, and you did it well. You should get top marks for creativity :)
04/27/07
very cute I loved the honesty of this marriage and the ending was most clever!
04/27/07
Very creative!
04/30/07
Wonderful! The sandwich at the end was the clincher for me...such an awesome touch for a realistic and well-written story.
05/01/07
Great ending. I liked the way the second story was woven into the main story.