The Official Writing Challenge
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08/31/06
This was almost sickening to me in that it conjured the image of Satan and his awful work so well. I shuddered when I finished reading it. I think you did a great job of expressing this, but I'm really not sure about a person that can get into the mind of Satan so well. Nevertheless, it is a warning for us all. And I think you're talented.
08/31/06
Wow! This is a different perspective on "melody" that I never expected. Fascinating imagery! Excellent writing!
09/02/06
This was a chilling piece, which is what you intended, I'm sure. Very unique approach to "Melody." Personally, I felt it went on a bit too long. Shortening it up a bit might make it stronger. Blessings!