The Official Writing Challenge
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05/29/14
Wow - what a great story! I loved it...excellent.

God bless~
05/29/14
This is a great story and a good take on this topic. It rang true. Well done!
06/05/14
Congratulations!

This was such an engaging story, one of my favs!

God bless~
06/05/14
What a cool story, and a bitter reminder of how wars impact and uproot innocent lives, through no fault of their own.

You did such a good job of capturing the feelings rushing through your MC that I felt a lump in my throat throughout my reading.

Excellent job! Congratulations on your EC!
06/05/14
Okay, I am teary eyed in Starbucks while reading this. You did a great job creating believable historic fiction. I enjoyed your story and want to read it again. Congratulations!
06/17/14
This is a powerful entry on many levels. I can only imagine the pain these Japanese-Americans had to endure, physically, emotionally and spiritually. Just when my head was hanging low for Yumi, Cat came to step up to the plate for righteousness and restored faith back into their friendship. And the last line left me smiling. I liked this a lot.