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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 4 – Masters)
Topic: Bridge (07/31/08)

TITLE: The Bridge Builder
By Tim George
08/03/08


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I sat in the wingback chair wearing a smile hopefully wide enough to cover the disappointment rattling around inside my empty heart. Another night of winning the world for Jesus had come, so here I was: Miss Sunday School teacher visiting people I didn’t know, accompanied by people I barely knew, trying to look as pleasant as a person could who had just decided the whole thing was a hopeless waste of time.

What a team we were. First there was Mr. Barnhill, 85 if a day and looking even older. Next to him sat Andy, a really nice guy who apparently had been born without one solitary enthusiasm gene in his entire body. And, of course, me.

“Great!” I thought as I nodded to whatever Andy was saying; “What a team. One is old as dirt and the other dry as dust.”

The couple we spoke with didn’t help matters either. I had prayed for a sign God was still doing something in my life before leaving home. Visions of some Hell’s Angel fresh out of prison crying out for God’s mercy had accompanied me in the back seat of the car as Dust drove and Dirt sat silent beside him. And what did we get? Mr. and Mrs. Nice! Both listened politely as Andy shared the Gospel. Another dull night fit for my equally dull and meaningless life.

“Thank you,” Mr. Nice replied to Andy politely, “but I have no use for those who murdered my family.”

Whoa; where did that come from? Ten minutes later I knew. The man’s family had all died at Dachau. He told of how Hitler and other “Christians” labeled them all Christ killers and deemed them not human. Unfit to breathe the same air as their superior Arian “Christian” lungs. Years as a Rabbi finally ended in him renouncing God completely.
He stood, making it obvious this visit was about to be over. “I could never believe in the Christ of such people.”

Find a bridge.

We had been taught to look for a bridge from where we were to where the ones we spoke to were. What kind of bridge could the three of us hope to build? Andy’s face betrayed the sheer panic that had already set in on him. I was Miss Nobody who had never been anywhere. And then, of course, there was Methuselah who had not grunted a complete sentence since the three us set out on this fiasco.

Find a bridge? Give me a break!

Andy and I were edging toward the door when Mr. Barnhill cleared his throat. Still seated, he peered over his glasses and spoke; “I was there.”

His words were so matter-of-fact, so simple, and yet so compelling all we could do was ease back into our seats: Mr. and Mrs. Nice, Andy and me. With his audience in place, Mr. Barnhill continued. “I was a private in the 45th. Didn’t want to go over there but thought it was my Christian duty to help rescue people from that sawed off madman. Think maybe you could listen to an old warhorse like me?”

I don’t recall what else was said. What I do remember is how an embittered Jewish ex-Rabbi and a long since retired American soldier met each other in the middle of that bridge: one listening intently as he was introduced to a Christ he had never heard of and never known; the other speaking as though eternity depended on his every word.

Find a bridge.

What had I been thinking? It was neither fate nor coincidence that brought Andy, Mr. Barnhill and me to the home of Mr. and Mrs. Nice. There was one who was there waiting on us when we arrived. One who had walked with a pimply faced private through the horrors of Dachau. One who had shown mercy to an orphan of the madness of war. One who had been patient with a self-involved Sunday School teacher. One who had built every plank of that bridge with his own person.

Find a bridge?

Next time I’ll remember who is already there. The Bridge Builder.


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Lynda Schultz 08/07/08
I love how you wrapped up this very good story. Jesus built a bridge with, as the gospel song goes: "only three nails and two pieces of wood."
Joanne Sher 08/07/08
Very powerful. I went from giggles to gasps to joy. Masterful.
Holly Westefeld08/08/08
Your story is engaging, and is a wonderful reminder that we are the tools of the Bridge Builder, not he our tool.
Sherry Wendling08/08/08
I love it, love it, love it! Your "voice" just sparkles, in an oh-so-true-to-life, absolutely artless style. Delightful, tongue-in-cheek humor, perfectly developed story, intensely satisfying ending that frames His beauty. Bravo!
Verna Cole Mitchell 08/10/08
This story is excellent on so many levels, but, most of all, for the way you wrapped the message in a story.
Scott Sheets08/12/08
Wonderful story! I truly appreciate how you brought the value of the older gentleman on that visitation call. The wisdom and experience of the aged are often a forgotten resource in our society. God uses people of all ages!
Chely Roach08/14/08
Wow, this was phenomenal...
Congrats, Tim. I loved this.
08/14/08
Congratulations on third place. You deserve it. One thing that could have made this story even better is to maybe have put Find a bridge in italics to make it stand out...Nevertheless, the story was great and the lesson greater. I love the way you labelled the people according to their personalities--Dust, Dirt and Mr. & Mrs. Nice!...Helen
Carole Robishaw 08/14/08
Well, I can see why you are on the masters level, this was definitely a masterpiece. Good job Tim, I've been where your MC sat, and struggled to find a bridge. You captured it well.
Amy Michelle Wiley 08/14/08
Ah, sometimes that bridge is hard to find, and sometimes it's right there. Good entry.
Patricia Turner08/14/08
"Next time I’ll remember who is already there. The Bridge Builder." Amen! A great piece! Congratulations!

Betsy Markman08/14/08
Very, very good. Congratulations!
Yvette Roelofse08/15/08
A wonderful piece, Tim. I loved the voice and characterisation; the beautiful and profound realisation the narrator has about the bridge. You deserve this win! :D
Elizabeth Hexberg08/15/08
Nice illustration of how we get so caught up in our own roles we sometimes forget who is truly in charge!
Clever, and real..thanks.
Well done and God Bless.
Elizabeth.
Beth LaBuff 08/19/08
Wonderfully written story, Tim. I was captivated. Congrats on you placing!


   
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