The Official Writing Challenge
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Good job. The mother created wonderful memories for her children to remember her by when she was gone. Your work was witty but encouraging
01/09/06
This is a treasure... tears, warmth, and bittersweet memories... beautiful...
01/10/06
I love this! Your last sentence is a treasure.
01/13/06
A lovely story. I too enjoyed the last sentence in particular.
01/13/06
What a touching piece ... well done.
01/14/06
Very touching story! You've captured the essence of several vying emotions here. Well done.
01/14/06
A lovely story, and well written; could you clue us in as to where this Lunares is located? I'd love to go there myself! Thank you for sharing this delightful memory.
Ah, a beautiful story, beautifully told! Precious, indeed!
Sweet - very sweet and tender. What a courageous woman to have a vision to give such a gift in her last months of life.
01/16/06
I've already commented, but I wanted you to know that I think you should've placed. It was a great story, Amy. :)
01/16/06
Delightful story, Amy. Good emories are the best things we can give to each other.
A pleasure to read. And as always, well written. Well done, Amy.
01/18/06
This was a sweet story. I agree with the others. Should have placed. :)