The Official Writing Challenge
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Written well! True reality for so many kids.
. . . and a whole new story is about to unfold on that one little word 'wait'. Your story is description of spring in the human soul.
What a lovely tale of a reawakening ... a thawing. Well done.
Very well done.
Wow! this was great! I felt those emotions all the way to the end..excellent!
You've done a great job portraying the emotions without becoming maudlin. I enjoyed the way you introduced hope. Good job.
"wait...", but I wanted so much more! The story had me mesmerized! So well written for such a young person, if this is indeed biographical.

A great read! A very touching story with an important lesson for us all!
Double Kudos for this one!
Wow. You have the "write stuff" for sure! Very well done. Absolutely PERFECT ending! :0)
This is deep - so much heart-level stuff going on. The end is perfect. I really want to know what the next 5 minutes was like!!!