The Official Writing Challenge
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10/24/13
Awww...so touching! Amen! Jesus can change lives, and continues to do so through-out the ages.

I loved this classically pulled together, tender and truthful poem.

Very nicely done! Excellent. You made my heart smile.

God bless~
This is lovely. Fear can really do a number on a person. Thankfully, Jesus can change all of that.

I admit I'm tone deaf and can't always here rhythm and rhyme. However, I found some of the rhymes a bit forced and had to reread the line to understand. It could just be me though. Once I reread it and understood it, I found myself nodding my head.

I could definitely feel the pain of the MC. You did a great job of covering the topic. The message is a powerful one too. The ending was perfect. Great job.
Precious . . .