The Official Writing Challenge
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Sarah's pain is well portrayed - but thank God for His intervention and His promises. God bless you.
06/17/13
I enjoyed this very much. It is full of emotion, well written, and with a great finish. Good writing.




















06/18/13
This is beautifully descriptive and a joy to read. You have really brought your characters and their so different personalities to life. I loved the 'interjections' of Sarah's dramatic thoughts and the lovely ending also.
Thankyou.
Loved hearing her thoughts in the midst of the storyline. Great writing.
06/18/13
I truly enjoyed this. Fear of the unknown is always taken away by putting one's happiness in the hands of God. Superbly written.
06/19/13
This is beautifully written and expertly crafted. Your descriptive setting that mirrored her moods and feelings was so good. I loved the ending.
Congratulations in ranking 25 overall!