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Sarah's pain is well portrayed - but thank God for His intervention and His promises. God bless you.
I enjoyed this very much. It is full of emotion, well written, and with a great finish. Good writing.

This is beautifully descriptive and a joy to read. You have really brought your characters and their so different personalities to life. I loved the 'interjections' of Sarah's dramatic thoughts and the lovely ending also.
Loved hearing her thoughts in the midst of the storyline. Great writing.
I truly enjoyed this. Fear of the unknown is always taken away by putting one's happiness in the hands of God. Superbly written.
This is beautifully written and expertly crafted. Your descriptive setting that mirrored her moods and feelings was so good. I loved the ending.
Congratulations in ranking 25 overall!