The Official Writing Challenge
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02/23/13
Wow - this was so powerful, I loved the ending, it gave me chills!

God bless~
02/26/13
Your story was completely engaging, start to the powerful finish. I loved your creativity.
Thank you so much. I really needed to hear this today. The Lord is our treasure; our sure foundation. He is indeed the only key we'll ever need. Powerful story which illustrates this point so well. I really felt for the MC. Loss is so hard and we try to hang on to it it every way we can. He was finally able to let go through letting go of some of those former "keys." Congrats on a well deserved top 18 placement!
I mean 19, still wonderful! I keep getting you and Wilma mixed up in terms of how you placed cause you were right next to each other... Blessings.
Congratulations on ranking 19th overall!