The Official Writing Challenge
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02/23/13
Very beautiful. Wonderful job with your poem.
God bless~
Great job. I especially liked the line about God watching the person - because He always does.
I enjoyed the progression of your poem. Good job.
I think you have quite the knack for writing powerful poems. I could feel the MC traveling through the dark and then the joy that was felt when she finally saw the light. I did notice that you switch from the past tense to the present and back to the past again. Other than that I think you did a splendid job and that this piece will touch many hearts.