The Official Writing Challenge
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Got me in from the beginning? Who are you? Jesus' blood personified! Wow. What an amazing choice, and one that you forshadowed so subtly. Well done.
In paragraphs 5 and 12, it's a bit awkward when the drop of blood refers to "his blood" as if it were something else than itself. But--this is remarkable! What a wonderful idea, so unique and meaningful.
Fascinating!!! What an interesting take on the topic, and the literal life of Jesus. So well-written. (And your hint was brilliant, too, Brenda)
I would never have thought of this approach! Very interesting use of personification!
The ultimate good voyage! I'm in awe of your creativity Brenda - writing from the perspective of a precious drop of Jesus' blood. Great work!
Ouch ... very strong entry. Nice writing and great reminder.