The Official Writing Challenge
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09/12/05
BEAUTIFUL!
09/12/05
A well written and encouraging poem. ‘I am your ship, and this vast ocean awaits’: let’s go sailing! I know you were trying to show physical growth but my initial take on ‘rather large ear’ was of confusion – maybe this was not about a person after all.
09/14/05
I really like the image of God being with us, waiting, until we come to Him. Very lovely.
I love the intimate tone you've woven into this poem, Sally. Beautiful!
09/17/05
This beautifully portrays the great love of God to us "while we were yet sinners." It is filled with tenderness. So lovely.
09/17/05
I like this... a tender piece. Poetry is soooo hard to do and you pulled it off nicely!
09/18/05
Beautiful
09/21/05
Sally, I can remember when you were just a wee lass on Level 1, and look at you now! Your writing just keeps getting better and better. This was a beautiful entry and you almost made it into the Editors' Choice (missed by a fraction). You placed in 10th position overall, (across all levels) so well done! Love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)