The Official Writing Challenge
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09/18/09
I like that you took the topic and applied it to scripture, not to the dictionary meanings. Nice job.
09/18/09
Most of what I see people over the age of 65 doing seems boring, because it focuses on the same-o,
same-o routines. Sometimes I have to wonder what happened to the creative mind.
09/19/09
I appreciated that you used the verse from Numbers. I didn't remember it, or that it was the only mention of "retirement" in the Bible. (thanks for enlightening me) This was creatively written!