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Your theme of rocking chairs worked just right for this topic, and the ending was perfect. I really liked your descriptive details.
A beautiful love story. Clever format. I'm crazy about this one.
Great presentation of this tender and sweet story of lovers apart, but then united forever. Thumbs up on this one.
Such a creative portrayal of mature love. Just lovely.
I like the way you were able to write the story in parallel. Different. But that's what makes for originality.
This was very unique and beautiful. I can really relate to it, having said goodbye to both of my parents last year. But I'm glad that they, like the couple in your story are together again, "without the loneliness of heart." Thanks for sharing this.
This piece rocks us between description and reflection. Thanks for keeping us coming back for each new piece of such a warm, reassuring picture.
Heartrending and absolutely beautiful! Congratulations!!
Lovely writing. You portrayed this with all the tenderness and love it deserved.