The Official Writing Challenge
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07/09/09
Lovely rhyme and sweetly told.

Why do we always assume that a youthful heart is more desirable than a maturing heart?
I related to this immediately, as I see myself so differently inside my head that a look in a mirror always provides a shock. I enjoyed your use of the topic.
07/10/09
Bit choppy in places but the sentiment is there, keep writing.
07/11/09
This poem has grasped my attention from the first stanza to the last. Thanks for writing this insightful poem.
07/14/09
I believe many of your readers will identify with this sweet telling of the twilight years.