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02/12/09
Beautifully written. I felt like I was right there in the story.
02/13/09
Well done. This is a beautiful story.
02/13/09
Beautiful message and loved how you used this inspiring song in your story.
02/15/09
Thank God there are no slums in Heaven. Mariana's life represents people with no hope, yet she was able to receive not only hope but "life" from her new friend. Inspirational story woven beautifully into this great song.
02/16/09
Absolutely beautiful. I LOVE this song, and the story you wove is absolutely captivating. Excellent.
02/16/09
Very sad, and written with great sensitivity.
Packed with emotion that drew me. Thanks for sharing!