The Official Writing Challenge
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02/16/09
This is a very informative piece. It would really help if you spaced between paragraphs - It would make it easier to read. I feel like I just read the Encyclopedia. Maybe I'm a tad bit smarter for it, you think:)
02/18/09
Wow! What a comprehensive summary of the continent! It was quite an achievement to fit this into the word limit. However, I felt it lacked creativity. There were some impressive statistics which I enjoyed reading (It is the home to the world's highest waterfall, Angel Falls in Venezuela; the largest river, the Amazon River;... the world's southernmost permanently inhabited community, Puerto Toro, Chile) but these were hidden away among many other facts. I would encourage you to restrict your information but find more to say about less. I would also strongly urge you to use paragraphs and put in more white space to make it easier on the eye of the reader. I hope these comments are useful. Bless you.