The Official Writing Challenge
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I love stories like this that give us a creative bit of history. Thanks for sharing!
Great perspective, expressive style, strong message, and you managed to tie in romance too. Good piece!
05/23/05
excellent writing! A true contender! :-)
05/23/05
Excellent writing, and you even managed to get a rose in there :)
05/23/05
Very Strong, a good entry.
05/25/05
A wonderful and scary look intothe martyrs heart.
05/26/05
You have evoked strong images with this martyr's death and his name lives on with love.
05/30/05
This transported me to another time and place and challenged me. Well done, and CONGRATULATIONS on your win!
Wow! Melanie, this is so beautiful. You have a gentle, lovely style. Great imagery, wonderful message. I LOVE IT! Congratulations on a well deserved win.
05/30/05
Beautiful story. Great writing! Congratulations on the win!

dave
Wonderful, Melanie. Your story both captured the imagination and informed -- great writing and well-deserved win! Congratulations!
05/31/05
oh wow, i am speechless...that story truly took the breath out of me and i am heartbroken...what a wonderful writing style you have, i think this story is brilliant. God bless and congratulations!
02/14/06
This puts a reality to his fate. Thanks for sharing. Well written and kept my attention.
02/14/06
Awesome in every way!