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Such a sweet testimony of the LORD going before you and taking you through victoriously. What a blessing your poem is!
05/23/05
all I can say is "wow". Loved the line: >>His Christianity was a wonderful gift.
The best gift that he could ever give. <<

Touching!
05/24/05
A nicely structured poem that says what you want it to clearly and succinctly. Love this line: 'Youíre working very hard just to keep yourself in debt.' It has so many layers of meaning.

05/27/05
The poem conveys thoughtfulness and caring and the gift that was most significant was his turning to Christianity. Well done.