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Such a sweet testimony of the LORD going before you and taking you through victoriously. What a blessing your poem is!
all I can say is "wow". Loved the line: >>His Christianity was a wonderful gift.
The best gift that he could ever give. <<

A nicely structured poem that says what you want it to clearly and succinctly. Love this line: 'Youíre working very hard just to keep yourself in debt.' It has so many layers of meaning.

The poem conveys thoughtfulness and caring and the gift that was most significant was his turning to Christianity. Well done.