The Official Writing Challenge
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01/11/07
Loved this! I was that nervous bride worried about my cooking compared to my mil's until one day she told me 'SHe comes to see us - not our home or cooking!' Very good dialogue and action. Good lesson too!
01/11/07
Such a lovely story with a delightful ending. Inspiring, interesting and deeply touching from beginning to end. Very well written. I really enjoyed the read!!
01/11/07
Yummmmm, sounds wonderful. Very sweet story, well-written.
I didn't know I was going to get weepy until I read the last few lines. This was believable and sweet. Good job.
Hmm, sounds like she cooks like me. I loved this. And it had several excellant messages. I especially like the praying for spaghetti sauce. Great job!
01/17/07
Just lovely and sweet. I enjoyed this so realistic and heartwarming story.