The Official Writing Challenge
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08/10/06
Brilliant! Interesting, creative and witty! - Not to mention on target Topic-Wise! Topnotch writing to boot...what else can one ask for? Kudos!
This was amazing. I love this take on the subject, and I'm still laughing about it! Thanks for sharing, and God bless,

Kevin
08/10/06
This story is AMAZING. Witty and wise...a perfect combination.
08/12/06
Great job! Love the way you handled this. "Big Tires" Ha!
I coudn't have said it better.
08/13/06
Awesome! So creative! Lots of wisdom displayed here! Great job! :)
Cute. Made me smile. Also reminded me a little bit of Jerry Mathers in Leave It To Beaver. :o)

Thanks for writing.
08/16/06
So VERY clever, William! I laughed and REALLY thought deeply at the same time - quite an accomplishment! I love how you ended it, too!
08/16/06
ROFL...ROFL...
This is great! Perfect! I love this! I lived in a small town in the states where having a pick-up truck was the "thing." I also got the message of the story and it was a humorous way to get the point across. Wonderfully-written!
08/17/06
Congratulations! Well done!
08/17/06
Loved it, loved it, loved it!! Congratulations on your win.
Congrats on your win, Willam!
08/17/06
CONGRATULATIONS! Wonderful story with a powerful message woven throughtout!!
Congratulations, william! Your great dialogue and excellent satirical humor hits home like a well-aimed arrow! Everything from the title to the cool ending is a grabber! Well-deserved win.
08/17/06
Oh this is very very funny. Probably my favourite of the week. Many congratulations.
08/17/06
SirWilliam, you are the most creative storyteller I've ever run across. Oh, that all sermons could come through such a funny story. This one has everything. Congratulations!
09/13/06
What an absolutely delightful and insightful story! Living in the country, on a farm, I could almost see the red creeping his neck! Thanks for sharing your creativity.
Ha! Good one. A great message given in a humorous way. I love it.
03/29/07
Great title, even better story. I love how you used the theme on this one. Ending was top notch!
Your title grabbed my attention since we have two trucks. One is a shortbed with big tires, ROFL! I really loved the whit, wisdom, and humor of this one Sir William. Having raised two sons we often discussed being careful about looking at trucks with big tires, lol.... too funny. Great writing.