The Official Writing Challenge
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08/10/06
You have a deft touch with the scene in the optometrist's office. And your eye doctor said something wise without knowing it--God is certainly beyond our science!
08/11/06
Creative and very interesting.
08/12/06
Marvelous, but you could have left out the first 6 paragraphs and had room to expand on the ending,which I was glad to see, but confused as to why. But I did like the last line.