The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a masterfully written allegory.
A wondrous retelling...thank you.
08/07/08
Excellent! This Allegory is spectacular. It sounds like a legend from a Native American culture...I found it most fascinating. Your theme of Bridge was executed supurbly, from Exodus to Christ, and His provision of the Bridge from death to everlasting life....I do hope this will be considered a winner. It is, in my books. But whatever are you doing in Intermediate? You should be in Advanced!!!!...Helen
Masterful, spellbinding, a wonderful allegory of our Savior's love for us and how He bridged the gap in our lives. The references were not necessary, your work spoke for itself.
Very powerful! Fantastic and well written!
Wow! Beautiful pictures you painted with words. You have a wonderful gift.
08/11/08
Very, very fresh. I enjoyed it greatly. Thank you for entering this. God bless.
08/11/08
Absolutely beautiful. Well done indeed.
I agree that this sounds like a Native American retelling of some famous Bible events. Definitely one of the more unique entries that I have read this week. Very well written. I appreciate you sharing it with us all.
08/14/08
This is a keeper for sure. Wow, you have a gift with this genre of writing. Extremely well done.
You have done a masterful job of retelling God's provision for man's salvation from an allegorical point of view. I loved the way you showed the two different belief processes ... Some were in the awe of Belief, more in the awe of Fear.. Great job Marlene, I hope this places.