The Official Writing Challenge
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08/07/08
I ran right along with your MC. I love the image of the unseen bridge, and it being the only way. Great job!
08/07/08
I could feel my heart beating faster with anticipation as the mc made the right decision. I like how you used the sound of the engine to follow him in this excellent analogy.
08/08/08
I love this. Well written.
08/08/08
Nicely executed allegory.