The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/07
Great description AND dialog - I was on the edge of my seat, and very engaged, from beginning to end. That last line really hit me too.
The title made me think of church camp, so I'm glad you drew me to a soldier's story instead.
10/25/07
Wonderful title, great first sentence, and the whole story maintained that high level of excellence.
I felt like I was there. Nice job.
10/27/07
Wonderful story. Engaging and realistic. Keep on writing.
10/29/07
I felt like I was there and knew the characters! Great story.
10/30/07
Nice story! I'm sure there are many such stories and moments going on over there. Keep up the good writing!
You did a great job drawing pictures with your words. A family friend leaves on an 18 month tour to Iraq next week so this caused tears to well up too. Please keep him in your prayers--his name is Eric.
11/01/07
Congratulations on your EC. This is a very moving story -- I want to know what happens to them next. Nice job with the topic.
11/01/07
Great job; I'd like to hear more of this, too! Congrats on your EC!
11/01/07
Congratulations on your 2nd place! Great writing!
Laury