The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/07
Love the parallels you draw between marriage and baptism - this gives me much to ponder.

There were a couple places in the middle that I got a bit lost, but that could have been me.

Love how you ended it too. Keep writing!
10/25/07
Fascinating parallel between Christian commitments and marital commitments.

I didn't understand the reservations that the narrator had about Lydia's baptism...I felt as if i was lacking some vital point of information that would make it all clear.

Love the ending, with the spontaneous decision. Very nice.
10/30/07
I understand the comparisons of the baptism and marriage to the narrator but I'm not sure by the end the narrator understood the significance of baptism. It was almost if jealousy was the driving force behind the decision. The writing in itself was not bad a few typos but overall okay.
11/02/07
Congratulations, Dorothy. Your entry placed 12th in Level 2. The Top 15 in each Level and the Top 40 Overall Lists are posted each week in the Weekly Results and Highest Rankings Forum of the Faithwriters Message Boards.