The Official Writing Challenge
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Thanks for sharing these inner feelings.
05/25/07
A really and truly beautiful poem - but I suggest you set it in verses in the usual, typical poetic form.

Really enjoyed this one! Thanks for sharing.
05/26/07
A nice testimony to God's saving power.

Separating this into lines and perhaps stanzas would definitely make this look more like a poem.

I liked these lines: "I am never alone, yet lonely I live;" and "keeping my faith, for I will soon be 'there.'"
Thanks for sharing.
05/26/07
Another interesting format - taking rhyming lines "out of the stanza box" and letting them flow with the freedom of prayer. Nicely done.
05/26/07
Very nice. You may want to rethink your format, but overall, it's great. Wonderful thoughts.
05/28/07
A very nice testimony which could easily be set into poetic form. Keep writing!
Very beautifully written.