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Topic: Write in the POETRY genre (05/17/07)
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TITLE: Spiritual Me | Previous Challenge Entry
By Rosa Reddick
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As I travel the path God planned for me each day; Many beautiful temptation comes my way. I see, recognize, understand, know all them for what they are; the enemy of evil is not very far. I fight with good as my sword and shield; for what to live amongst the lillies in the field.
I prepare for the days as I lie down at night; for the plan from God, takes me through my plight. I am never alone, yet lonely I live; People associate with me, only for what I can give. I gave away too much of my soul; through Jesus, God heard me, now I am whole. Broken hearted, no self esteem, no willingness to go; God showed me all the things to woe. Now a smile is all I have to share; keeping my faith, for I will soon be "there." Amen.
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Really enjoyed this one! Thanks for sharing.
Separating this into lines and perhaps stanzas would definitely make this look more like a poem.
I liked these lines: "I am never alone, yet lonely I live;" and "keeping my faith, for I will soon be 'there.'"
Thanks for sharing.