The Official Writing Challenge
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05/06/07
Simply wonderful!
Such tenderness demonstrated here. This is some great writing.
05/10/07
A beautiful reminder of the only fear that is the beginning of wisdom.
05/10/07
A great perspective and wonderfully woven together (I just read Isaiah 40 the other night when I was worried about some things, as well).
Wow. This part - "He gathers the lambs in his arms and carries them close to his heart" - was absolutely what I needed to hear. The entire piece was lovely, a perfect pace and such a wonderful setting. You write extremely well. Congratulations on making first place!
05/11/07
What a sweet, precious story that applies to the child in all of us, for we are God's children. Your piece is poignant and beautifully describes the great awe-inspiring Father that is our mighty God!