The Official Writing Challenge
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05/03/07
I enjoyed reading this--the descriptive writing brought this bilblical account to life and I felt as though I was there. Great title, too--it sparked my curiosity!
05/06/07
I was touched by this line--a task that angels would have died for. New to me, and very true.

Be careful of capitalization errors, easy to fix with a final edit.

An original POV, and an enjoyable read.
A good rendition of an old, old story. A dreadful task indeed, but told with conviction. Good job.
God Bless