The Official Writing Challenge
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03/08/07
So true, both senarios, unfortunately (only the former). Well written with good flow. Easy to follow. Keep writing and God bless.
03/09/07
It was very effective to contrast the two churches.

This had a narrative style--consider livening it up some with dialog, and some passages with depth of feeling.

So much truth here--too bad this can't be distributed to some of those churches!