The Official Writing Challenge
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11/01/05
You've made me so hungry. All these delicious dishes and aromas in the kitchen you've displayed in tantalizing words that evoke tasty images. I just like the phrase 'rise to heaven as a fragrant symphony.'
11/01/05
I agree with P above. One comment, break the dialogue out for easier reading.
11/03/05
I've never heard of Taylor's Pork Roll, but I'm ready to try some. Thanks for this evocative essay!
11/03/05
I really loved the last sentence you wrote which tied it all up in one big bow at the end.
God bless you, littlelight
11/04/05
I'm drooling! I can almost hear the silverware clanging, the family laughing and the sink being filled with soapy water to soak the dishes.
11/06/05
Wonderful! Took me back to my grandmother's kitchen...it was like getting in a time machine. Thanks!