The Official Writing Challenge
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05/19/06
This is polished writing with an almost O.Henry twist at the end. I enjoyed your choice of words and your creative writing. God bless you.
05/22/06
I'm so glad you ended it the way you did!

Quite a high percentage of your sentences begin with "Stan..." Maybe work on more variety of sentence structures?

Nice irony here, and good plotting.
Congrats on placing Jake. Nice twist ending.

Blessings!
Trina
05/25/06
I'm so glad to see your winning entry and your name up in lights! God bless you with all of His best, and Congratulations!