The Official Writing Challenge
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Very cute little slice-of-life story. Enough realism to keep me reading. Well done.
04/23/13
Ah, such clever writing of this account. I could picture it all. I loved your ending numbered comments! Great work.
So well written and very entertaining! Worthy of the Master's Level . . .
04/25/13
Congratulations on placing 2nd in your level!
Awesome story! That actually happened to my brother once, except that time it was a button... Congrats on second place!
Congratulations on ranking 2 in your level and 11 overall! (The highest rankings can be found on the message boards) You did a fantastic job on this piece. I love your subtle sense of humor. This was a competitive week and to come so close to the top ten overall must feel a tad bittersweet. Keep writing because you will be there in no time with delightful well-written gems like this!
Congratulations!
04/26/13
Great title for this fun and interesting true story. Congrats on your wins with this descriptive tale taken from a page of the beginning chapters of your life. Keep writing.