The Official Writing Challenge
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Normally, I like prose connected and flowing, but your construction showed your intensity.
What a very clever devotional. The style you've chosen lends itself perfectly to your message. I enjoyed and appreciate your writing here. Thanks!
At least we can count on being blessed when we sneeze . . .
CONGRATULATIONS! An HC is level one is very rare! Excellent writing, my friend!
I'm so sorry dear, I meant EC not HC. EC is much better. Editor's Choice is rare in level one. I think you might think of moving up a level! Very good writing!
Congratulations on you EC! Great job!!!
Wonderful entry! Congratulations on a well deserved EC!
I really "connected" with your words. What a great way to remind us to love the ones we'd rather be done with.
Good Job!
Congratulations on making the EC list and placing 1st in your level. Surely you'll be moving up a level soon with writing like this. Nice flow, great message and liked the ending sentence--it tied the whole piece together.
You made great use of contrasting the sneeze irritant with a human element and the reminder to love people in spite of how they are. This was a wonderful piece of work. A sneeze cue would be beneficial for me numerous times each day!
Well done and congratulations on placing in the EC.