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TITLE: The Walmart Greeter Saves the Day | Previous Challenge Entry
By Donna Howell
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Great job. And, praise God you weren't hurt. A house can be repaired...a life cannot.
Kudos to you. Thanks for sharing.
God bless,
Camille~
You may want to break it into smaller paragraphs and also double space between the paragraphs. Also be careful you don't give away the ending with the title. I'm terrible at not reading titles so I didn't see it until the end. However, I think if I had the ending may have lost that glorious surprise for me.
This reminds me of a sermon my minister does. He asks everyone how would you feel if you found out your soul purpose in life were to smile at the store clerk? Of course most people feel shock and horrified that God wouldn't give them a greater purpose. However your story really showed what a difference a smile can make. It likely will spread and one smile may touch countless people. Lovely message.