The Official Writing Challenge
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This is an interesting story. It can be weary to constantly be working on relationships and having to watch what you say.

Be careful when you quote from a song that it is not protected by copyright. Also in a footnote you can add the name of the song, Pass it On and the composer without it adding to your word count.

I found myself wondering what the original disagreement was about but the truth of the matter is it doesn't matter. There's a lesson in this for all of us and leaving that part a mystery makes it easier for people to connect their own problems with the MC.
This was an intense read that, for me, held a myriad of emotions. It was well written and it was an easy read.

I particularly loved the message at the end of the entry. Overall, a very good job.

Thank you.

God bless,