The Official Writing Challenge
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Sweet story that reads like children's books I have read. Children like the repeating questions and answers from mom. Very nice. I was a little confused about the quilt when they are out walking. Was it around her shoulders?
06/09/07
Very sweet - and great for the audience. Putting spaces between your paragraph may make this easier to read. Send me a private message if you'd like help with that. Great story.
06/12/07
You have some VERY good word pictures here. My favortite line is, "but I couldn’t see over the reds and blues of my quilt. Granny made it for me: my first winter quilt. She finished it on a day when the trees wore a golden rainbow of leaves." I think it reminds me of my Grandma. Your whole article "sparked a lot of emotion." Thanks!
Nice informative reading for a child, in a way he/she can understand.