The Official Writing Challenge
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12/01/06
Pretty good. A little awkward to read in some places, some missing punctuation, otherwise, quite a story! Good job!
12/01/06
What a beautiful story. I love the way that you shared your heart so freely. My sense is that this was also a healing story for you to write. May the Lord bless you and your writing!
12/02/06
What lovely dedication to your sister. How wonderful that you were there to "send her home". Keep writing!
10/16/07
Dear Brother in Christ !! Tat was a very touching article.Coz even I had been through the same when I had to say 'Good Bye' to my dear brother. I should say the last sentence in your article ........ is truly where you were luckier than me......... you got a chance to love her more dealry but I ......... lost him in an accident....... so sudden , so unreal n very painful.It still takes a few tears for me to accept the truth !! God bless you bro n b more used for God through your comfortind words. Amen