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Pretty good. A little awkward to read in some places, some missing punctuation, otherwise, quite a story! Good job!
What a beautiful story. I love the way that you shared your heart so freely. My sense is that this was also a healing story for you to write. May the Lord bless you and your writing!
What lovely dedication to your sister. How wonderful that you were there to "send her home". Keep writing!
Dear Brother in Christ !! Tat was a very touching article.Coz even I had been through the same when I had to say 'Good Bye' to my dear brother. I should say the last sentence in your article ........ is truly where you were luckier than me......... you got a chance to love her more dealry but I ......... lost him in an accident....... so sudden , so unreal n very painful.It still takes a few tears for me to accept the truth !! God bless you bro n b more used for God through your comfortind words. Amen