The Official Writing Challenge
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Very nice poem. It flowed fairly well but a couple of minor grammatical errors seemed to stop the flow for me.
All in all, it was very well written, well done.
12/01/06
Nice poem with some grammar glitches, but this appears more of a lyric, have someone score this for you.
12/02/06
A hearfelt prayer. It expresses your desire to serve God very well. Nice job.