The Official Writing Challenge
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11/17/06
Quite lovely writing.

In a piece this short, 5 questions are perhaps a bit much. And I encourage you to space your paragraphs for greater readability.

I like the image of the tethered cross vey much.
11/18/06
Very good images and nicely done comparison. Keep writing!
11/23/06
I liked this devotional very much! Short, sweet and to the point. A space between paragraphs and in my opinion...an A+; nicely done.