The Official Writing Challenge
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11/17/06
This is excellent!
11/18/06
I enjoyed this very much. It's very true. Great job!
I enjoyed your work and your way with words. Well done!
11/18/06
Beautifully written - meter is spot on. The message is awesome - the more we struggle, the deeper in we get. When we give up is he saves us.
11/23/06
Very creative! An exceptional piece of work with great rhythm and beautifully written thoughts. (Personally, just one person's opinion - I would have liked to see the word "Lifeguard" with exclamation points...as if shouting perhaps) but I loved it as is! very good...no, it is a Super Job! Kudos!