The Official Writing Challenge
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What a picture the poet paints marvelously of a well-known contest. And the message presented with the narrative is even more thrilling!
Well done.
God bless~
Your pen (or keyboard) is the brush and the words are the paint. With each stroke, you pull the reader into the minds of all involved. The topic is highlighted perfectly. I totally enjoyed this stunning picture you painted. I imagine like any great work, different people will take different messages from this piece which takes true talent.
This piece just begs to be recited aloud. The tempo is great and carries one to the end.I love the way you retold the story of David and Goliath from the viewpoint of a watching God in Heaven and that the cons were at first so positive and reasonable, but became cons in contrast to faith. Brilliant! Sometimes God is waiting for US to turn the cons into pros.
"All things are possible to him who believes"
Congratulations! Happy Dance!
Congratulations Margaret!
Well done.

God bless~
I'm happy to see you so high in EC with this awesome poem!
Margaret, another winner (congrats on the Editor's Choice award), masterfully written--We have come to expect no less from you. This is one I want to read over and over. (You've taken a favorite Bible story and created a beautiful rendition of it). I hope you're thinking of publishing your work in a book. I love this.
Congratulations, Margaret! Another of your poetic masterpieces, so very well expressed. A very well deserved 2nd place EC. (That's not my initials at the end! I could have said,'a very well deserved 2nd place EC. EC)
Congratulations on your EC2!