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Topic: Omnishambles (05/01/14)
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By Wesley Hesketh
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was here judging me.
He had this two-edged sword
commanding it must be!
His anger comes on quickly
as He sits upon His throne.
He always turns His back on me;
thunder is His tone.
All forgiveness, empty
at times, God’s given up.
He removes the hope for life --
gone is the living cup.
Woe is the life I live
as silence fills the air.
I continue looking ‘round,
but my God’s not there.
I have sinned forever;
now God can’t hear my name.
I hide in the deepest valley
under this weight of shame.
I listen to the evil
in my life and through the years.
It only brought me sorrow
it only brought me tears.
Standing in the throne room
spouting, “How great I am!”
Satan says I can be like him
I’m a god and not a man.
Like millions, I believed him.
that’s when God took charge.
He banished Satan to the Earth
where he now roams at large.
God crushed the evil power.
it’s gone, no longer there.
God turned my life around
Showing me He does care.
He shown me it’s His kingdom
and all who gather ‘round.
Will live with Him eternally
gathered here on holy ground.
There’s a word Omnishambles
That tells what my story means.
As Satan try’s to take charge
a struggle’s what I’ve seen.
It also shows the true God
The one that really cares.
The one who’s heart opens wide
Taking in all that is there.
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God bless~
Watch some of your contractions - tries rather than try’s, whose rather than who’s.