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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Omnishambles (05/01/14)

TITLE: Unnecessary shambles
By Kristen Gotta
05/05/14


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The progression of faith in general has limited an omnishamble on several accounts as to where God stands before the men who cannot sustain liberty and justice through rackets and forerunners. We have been limited in our belief if a great solstice of coming events comes from a political, or very well seen as industrial, leaders. The unsustainable growth in the weapons department rather than the health and wellness of family lives causes the political chaos to erupt in a way where they have to prove the spending was necessary. If our taxes have been going into massive attack mechanisms and research, the very real relation is that rather than trying to gain peace by providing support in other ways such as the call of Free Land rather than claim rights because we have bigger guns and laws that prevent another race to show their loved ones another side of life and possibly grow in opportunity. Supposedly, we vote, however, we are told a ridiculous amount of horrifying declarations that play on our emotional traits rather than let us produce logical explanations around the dissension and hatred of telecast news stations rather than refuse the drama and let love set the example in the first place. Light in the truth never surrenders to the input of a dark enthusiasm meant to dismantle our strongest attributes; care, hope, or the will to help one another survive and build communities. Why not continue the search for those with the capabilities from anywhere in the world to prove that there are more influential natures that impact us in a positive direction rather than a blasphemous position of mainstream power?


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Gregory Kane05/10/14
Let justice roll on like a river, righteousness like a never-failing stream!

You might like to look at shortening your sentences so as to improve the flow of your argument. Just a suggestion.
Judith Gayle Smith05/13/14
Passionate, but confusing.
CD (Camille) Swanson 05/14/14
The tie in for the topic was infused throughout your piece, which showed frustration in the world we live in today. Well done.

Take joy in knowing the LORD is watching over us at all times...

God bless~