The Official Writing Challenge
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05/10/14
Let justice roll on like a river, righteousness like a never-failing stream!

You might like to look at shortening your sentences so as to improve the flow of your argument. Just a suggestion.
Passionate, but confusing.
05/14/14
The tie in for the topic was infused throughout your piece, which showed frustration in the world we live in today. Well done.

Take joy in knowing the LORD is watching over us at all times...

God bless~